From Sweet Dub's iPhone, written on Memorial Day weekend:
I just went to the beach with my daddy and mommy I had a great time with my family we dug a tunnel we almost hit water my little sister is scared of the sand and dosnt want to put her shoes on I wanted to swing on the swings but my dad didn't let me so we had to leave good bye.
It makes me a little breathless, reading it, because there's no punctuation, but that is part of the beauty of it.
4 comments:
I love the absence of punctuation and I love how kids just put it out there goodbye
only our child could get us to read a stream of conciousness without punctuation and make us love it and wait for another opportunity to do it again -- lol
bridget: lol goodbye
mamasez: i can hardly wait to see what she comes up with next!
Awesome! A mini-Faulkner! :)
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